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Sometimes a tree, standing strong and alive.
Sometimes a bee taking flight from her hive.
Sometimes a stag, fleet of foot and proud.
Sometimes a river, powerful and loud.
Whether water or earth or fire or air,
He is the spirit you feel everywhere.
Take a leisurely walk through his forest someday,
But take care not to have your mind stolen away.
He is the hunter, the man with great horns,
Whose clothing is foliage, whose skin is shorn.
In face he is shadowed, with eyes deep and green.
In soul he is wise, enigmatic, unseen.
His legend rings out over many an age,
Over many a woodland, and many a page.
Harm not his kingdom, not his gentle land;
His blessing is yours if you take his hand.
In his world of summer, the newly-dead roam,
Waiting for his guidance to see them home.
To the vast wilderness your prayers should be sent.
Ask for strength and for peace in the life you've been lent.
Remember always the heart of the vine,
And you will be safe in his arms divine.
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I couldn't decide whether to write about the Green Man or the Horned God, so I ended up writing about a blend of the two. I apologize if my doing so offends anyone (I don't expect it will, but just in case).
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*indiana-w May 4, 2012  Student Writer
I usually think of the Green Man as a sort of spirit subordinate to the Horned God (which might be more offensive to some) but because of this the poem worked for me.
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~NorthWind-foxtrot229 May 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
As I like to say, the strength of Paganism lies in its diversity. Everyone has his/her own beliefs, and that's all the better, in my opinion. Your idea makes sense to me. Thanks for reading my poem!
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*indiana-w May 6, 2012  Student Writer
^^
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~Cernig Sep 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderful piece of praise. I'd happily use this in my own rituals, with permission.
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~NorthWind-foxtrot229 Sep 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Of course, feel free to use it.
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~Cernig Sep 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. Blessed be, C
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~NorthWind-foxtrot229 Sep 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Blessed be!
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~thespes Apr 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I really enjoyed this! I don't often see poetry to the God (who, at least in my way of thinking is both the horned god and the green man :shrug:). You write very well, and it was a pleasure to read.
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~NorthWind-foxtrot229 Apr 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I usually don't write poems that rhyme, but I thought it worked well for this one. (I agree with you, but when I started writing I wanted to focus on one aspect or the other. The way it turned out feels better to me, though.)
Thank you for your input!
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~thespes Apr 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure!
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